
Similar species: True Flies
By William Bodine
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Uploaded Jun 9, 2022. Captured Jun 8, 2022 20:28 in 2847 E Fountain St, Mesa, AZ 85213, USA.
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Why is it I am never satisfied with the photo? I see all kinds of things I could or should do, but lose interest or time as I move on to other projects. Are other macro people like me too? Posted 3 years ago
A key can be found here:
https://bugguide.net/node/view/42317 Posted 3 years ago
I just posted another shot of the dorsal side of the fly. I will take look at the two species you suggested. Condylostylus caudatus group or Condylostylus longicornis. Posted 3 years ago
It looks very close to Condylostylus longicornis which is prominent in the SW USA. Lets call it! Posted 3 years ago
1. Composition is decent and positioning OK. One tiny detail makes a difference though, the bent leg. If it would be straight or in a more natural position, the photo would pass as possible living subject, which is generally more attractive (in my opinion). I do realize how hard it is to do though, those legs don't always cooperate.
2. There's this blue-ish color hinge across the photo. I wonder if it's a white balance problem, or perhaps you intentionally were going for it as an artistic choice? Somewhat related to this point is that I find the shadows lifted too far. The photo only has midtones and few deep shadows or highlights, that makes it a bit more "bland".
3. I'm not a big fan of this background. It seems a bit random. I'd prefer a clear choice for white, dark, or a deep color, but this seems whitish with lots of color "leaks". If that was intentional, forgive me, then we simply have a different taste.
4. There's room for improvement in cleaning up in post processing. For example, the smudges around the subject in various places. Not a fun job to do, but it looks less sloppy.
Interestingly, your other angle on this subject has none of the above "problems".
Keep up the good work, it's a difficult hobby, getting everything right is close to torture. Posted 3 years ago
I very much appreciate and seek out comments and critique. Everything I have learned has been on my own via YouTube and other posted videos online. Less than a year ago I was just understanding the very basics of my photo editing software GIMP. I had hardly touched any of the manual settings on my camera. I was mostly point-and-shoot. So, I look to others who offer more experience.
The composition was not exactly as I liked it. The leg certainly would’ve looked better if I could’ve extended it. The whole insect was about 5 mm long making it very difficult to get it into any type of pose. Initially I wanted it on a green leaf, but I just couldn’t get there without destroying heads, wings, and legs. It finally got to the point I just decided to move on, glue it on a pin and put it in front of a background. The dorsal view on the green background was actually taken in front of a leaf that the fly was captured on.
I should check my white balance which I don’t do very often as that may help eliminate some of the blue tint. Additionally, the photo does look flat. Do I eliminate that by increasing or decreasing the lighting on one side or is that managed better in post using contrast or hue saturation? What do you normally use?
Yes, I really struggled with this background. I like your idea of going with a single solid color. That will help get rid of a lot of variances and smudges. I think I might try and switch over to flash instead of continuous lighting. I can shoot at a higher shutter speed eliminating highlight “white worms” artifact and other motion problems. When I start getting into the 3X to 5X magnification realm, minor problems all of a sudden become very noticeable.
The dorsal view on the green background was actually the leaf from the tree. And I totally agree there’s always room for more cleanup in editing. I’m really slow at it and I think I just got tired and fed up with it all.
I still greatly enjoy the process of discovering new things I have never seen before in my close-up and macro photos. I had no idea how much time it actually took to prepare, compose, shoot, and edit many of the macro shots. Even some of my worst shots still amaze me so I will keep going.
Thanks so much for your comments. It would be fantastic to have a live hands-on mentor other than watching a video of Alan Walls from 2000 miles away. Maybe one of these days I might even take an actual photography class.
Posted 3 years ago
For white balance, I think you might have it set to auto white balance? In a controlled environment like this, you can just set it to "flash", which is a perfectly neutral white balance of 5300-5600K. This way the scene should not look overly cold or hot.
As for contrast, I think there's nothing wrong with the exposure itself in this photo, rather I think something is missing in the post processing step regarding shadows, that are too bright (in my opinion). You can play around with the contrast slider, deepening blacks/shadows specifically, etc. A histogram is a good tool to inspect the tonality of an image.
I can relate to manually cleaning up an image costing a lot of time :)
Posted 3 years ago